Urbanization,agricultural fires and forest conversion for oil-palm plantations and other forms of agriculture are the main catalysts for climate change in Malaysia.The Malaysia government's population policy cause many forests are cleared to satisfy the need of people.The increase of the price of oil-palm causes more deforestation to convert forests to oil-palm plantation.Besides that,the increase in population also causes more serious pollution in this country.More Carbon dioxide is released as the population keeps increasing.Malaysia is a developing country,more factories are set up to boost up Malaysia's economy.Therefore,more polluted gases such as carbon monoxide and CFC will be released.these gases will cause very serious environment problem and the climate change in Malaysia.The climate changehas caused very serious flood problem in Malaysia.For example,serious flood in Johor has caused a great lost to the economy of the Johor state.Houses and roads are destroyed by this rare flood.Some people even sacrifice their life.Besides that,global warming raise the sea level of the whole world.The area of country will decrease.As a result,some cities will disappear forever on the world's map.The Bakum Hydroelectric Project in Sarawak,Malaysia put 700km square of land under water-equivalent to the size of Singapore.The rainforest of this part of South east Asia has some of the highest rates of plant and animal endemism,species found there and nowhere else on Earth.This dam has done irreparable ecological damage to the region.
3 comments:
Thanks for the post, Wee. You throw lots of ideas into this short paragraph. I feel like you could have focused more deeply on the main points mentioned in your topic sentence rather than expounding as well on points such as the flooding and the building of the Bakun Dam.
You also need to look at sentences such as the following to consider your use of grammar:
1) The Malaysia government's population policy cause many forests are cleared to satisfy the need of people.
2) The increase of the price of oil-palm causes more deforestation to convert forests to oil-palm plantation.
I appreciate your hard work!
Its economic vs nature... And I think we cannot have a best situation with both the deal... What we can do is to balance out...
Nice post with lots of ideas...
The fact is huamn need energy, and electrical energy is the most easiest energy to transfer so far.
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